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Monday, February 11, 2013

Monsters in California: Chapter 1 Comparison

Murder your darlings, right?
I started with the darlings and just kept going.

Left: Original               Right: Revised

What you're looking at is the first chapter of "Monsters in California," which I am currently in the process of destroying--I mean revising!

It's cathartic, taking something you spent years working on and then just tearing it apart. Hopefully, when the dust settles and the editing is finished; I'll have a lean, mean supernatural horror novel.

...Or maybe I'll end up deleting everything that made the book worth reading and it'll be horrible. Time will tell!

1 comment:

  1. Oooh. Send me what you got when you're done chopping up chapters.